What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
A matter of considerable controversy at present is whether benefits of living in large cities, in opposition to drawback in rural region. How to overcome the problems. we will discuss the both side points in this essay.
To begin with, there are multiple positive points are there while residenting in developed areas rather than the undeveloped one. for example, local transport like, bus, train, metro, airplane, auto, rickshaw, bicycle etc which help humans to travel between destinations within minimum time. also latest technology available without any hesitation and additional cost as most of them invented for the cities. In addition to above, best medical facility, updated devices which will help us to reduce the manpower working hours as well as money. Nowadays, after the food, shelter and cloths the 4th need that should be reach everyone i.e. internet. The plenty of electricity given to high public zone rather the rural because the rates and the consistent users often get some discount.
On the other hand, as mentioned in given paragraph their total opposite condition in this section. The rates of basic facilities are low as compare to huge population sectors. Administrator have to decide some rules and create new awareness programs amongst these people to improve them, also let them understand their unique value in this environment, Government should take initiative of such situations to guide the ground users to about it's best outputs.
In conclusion, we can say that, might be rural area not having sufficient facilities but still many people select it to living here. They supposed to take care of it’s initiatives and many more yet to do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21771217712 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61901132615 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708487084871 0.580463131201 122% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6922252747 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159109343787 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471905828078 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636537401624 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101464859387 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721971801576 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.