Some people say schools should be responsible to teach young adults to look after their health, others think this is not responsibility of schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people hold the opinion that young adults must be taught pertaining to healthy life by their schooling system while other says not. I, however, believe this is not school's management responsibility to teach students about health as it has number of health institutions in every country that plays most significant role in the field of health.
In today's era, health problem has become most top-op issue around the globe that actually is more essential part of every human's life to spend better life henceforth, parents are too much anxious about their children’s health as compare to past. Furthermore, many intellectual people are concerned that guardian plays most imperative role among children's life to make them easily understand comparatively. Some other says, parents spend more and more time with their offspring to teach them each and every thing whether it is health relating words or something else, along with, many adepts assert that children adopts their habit by their family members even if it is bad or good habit.
On the flip-side, number of health doctors and consultants are working across the country to provide better suggestion and guideline to the nation that shows more reliability to make people understand concerning to health as compare to schools. Moreover, school is very well known place for providing education system where people learn to build their skills not to resolve health problems as well as, education and health are two entirely different fields and government possess every kind of specialist for every sector in the country. Last and foremost, number of things are being conducted in schools for instance, sports activities, seasonal calibration, extra curriculum activity and many others which shows inadequacy of time in schools to cover-up all the thing under the one roof.
To sum up, in order to provide better counseling of health to children and adults parents need to contact with concern institution and doctors not to impose everything on school's management.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ctually is more essential part of every humans life to spend better life henceforth, p...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 965.302439024 177% => OK
No of words: 324.0 196.424390244 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27160493827 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.646464111 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 106.607317073 175% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577160493827 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 283.868780488 182% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5503049776 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.777777778 112.824112599 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 22.9334400587 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 5.23603664747 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237441851831 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102539132346 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675680839323 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156373686934 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100874694219 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 61.2550243902 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 40.7170731707 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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