The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea.
What are the reasons and solutions?
It is true that both wildlife and marine species have undergone tremendous habitat loss due to the human race’s behavior. There are manifold reasons resulting in this problem and measures must be taken to ensure the right of animals.
Human actions are likely to be the main cause that puts the natural creatures’s lives at risk. One possible reason for this is that deforestation has been abused significantly over the years. With the money earned from erecting factories and housing, numerous people are tempted to decimate plenty of rainforests which are home to a substantial number of terrestrial species. Furthermore, the marine life has been immensely polluted by oil discharged from ships into ocean, and poisonous chemicals dumped into sea anually. As a result, these pollutants drive the natural world to the brink of extinction.
Council and national governments are advised to take steps as a way to alleviate the aforementioned issues. In order to increase the conservation of the natural habitat, it is essential that political leaders should heighten people’s awareness. Should the public have a good grasp of how the environment is vital to their lives, it seems to me that there would be an increasing number of people joining environment conservation. Another utilitarian solution which could be implemented is the authorities should impose a stricter punishment on lawbreakers. A good example of this is that incarceration tends to act as a deterrent to those who have the intention of disrupting animal’s habitats.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that natural habitats are of importance to the human and thus we should take actions to protect Mother Earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tural world to the brink of extinction. Council and national governments are adv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31734317343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1133985232 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0935425262 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103483357169 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318434181175 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338195147674 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630497604397 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381798439074 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.