"Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
The letter states two statements on which it draws conclusion. Let us analyze the facts in order.
First statement says that manned space flight is costly and dangerous. But is doesn't provide any data on what aspects it is costly or dangerous. Without knowing what is happenig reallly, we cannot be sure that it is costly or dangerous. If we consider that sending men and women would be costly as we need to train them for many years to get accustomed to the outer space atmosphere, the assumption of cost is true. And considering human errors with computer errors, it probable that computers are best compuational devices without any errors, hence sending humans could be dangerous.
Second statement says that recently unmmaned space probes and satellites have provided us much useful information. But it does say anything about the cost invovled in building these unmanned space probes or satellites. If the cost of building these is more comparatively to the cost of sending human, then the conclusion is not reasonable to invest more resources in unmanned space flight.
Moreover, it is only recently that unmmaned space flights are successful. This could be one time success. We cannot gurantee that, in future also every mission of unmmaned space flights will be in the same way. The letter given doesn't provide any information about the mission like whether it is about gathering the information on nearby planets like Venus or father away Saturn. If we consider that mission is on Venus, then human involvement would be of high risk because of nearness of Sun to it. If we consider that the mission is on Saturn, Then human involvement would be of no risk beacuse of farthernes of Sun to it.
Without having all the information we discussed earlier, we cannot conclude that investment n unmanned space flight wil
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 308 350
No. of Characters: 1486 1500
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.189 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.825 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.594 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.118 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.745 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.32 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.575 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.221 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... flight is costly and dangerous. But is doesnt provide any data on what aspects it is ...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ll be in the same way. The letter given doesnt provide any information about the missi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, then, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 306.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99346405229 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66233789372 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513071895425 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 705.55239521 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8205186576 57.8364921388 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8823529412 119.503703932 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.70786347227 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355314611513 0.218282227539 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11802342142 0.0743258471296 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761602497887 0.0701772020484 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17040716665 0.128457276422 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995779677335 0.0628817314937 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.3799401198 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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