You are organising a trip to Paris, France for a group of students from England.
Write to the manager of the Youth Hostel Association in Paris. In your letter, explain
when you want to visit Paris
how long you will stay
how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I am arriving there to explore the Paris city on August 8th, 2019 with a group of young students accompanying. I have already made flight booking to fly to Paris from London, England early morning at 6:00 AM on August 8th. As per flight schedule, we will reach there at airport by 9:00 PM, and after getting luggage, we will be heading to your place, Youth Hostal, Paris.
According to trip itinerary, the stay would be initially for two weeks and four days including arriving and departure day, but there is possibilty that it could be extended to three weeks. Because we are planning to visit entire city having less time, it can be considered that longer stay is expected.
In total, we are fourteen young students and all are above eighteen. If we talk about quest category, I think we all should be considered as adults. We are looking for boudget room category with double bed and heating facility. Moreover, we will have breakfast and dinner at hotel premise.
I am looking forward hearing from you as sson as possible.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73846153846 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43444491106 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671794871795 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3762799604 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157262789179 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588302792968 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430287776467 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894339058983 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536012098876 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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