Children can learn effectively by simply watching television, therefore they should be allowed to do so to watch T.V. regularly at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Development in the technology is benefiting children in many ways. Some people argue that children can upgrade their knowledge by watching television, thus children should have permission to see television at regular time at school as well as at home. While watching films definitely improve the knowledge of a viewer, I think observing screen for more time period may have disadvantage for the viewer in terms of vision.
Children should be encouraged to watch television as it is the easy way to learning about different aspects. Television programs can help the learner to understand things easily and remember for longer time as they are considered more interesting for the viewer because of the design and graphics in the presentation. For instance, Documentary play on Discovery channel is more interesting as it involves graphics with sound mixture to keep the viewer focus as compared with reading about the same on books.
On the other hand, watching television on regular basis can have detrimental effects on health, therefore students should not be forced to watch television for long time. Watching screen for the longer duration can have adverse impacts on the eye of a viewer and the addiction of same result into negative consequence only. For illustration, according to the survey of health department of USA, around 20 percent of eye problems are genetic and remaining 80 percent are affected by watching television for longer duration.
In conclusion, although, watching television for the learning purpose is profitable for the learner, however, the drawbacks can result into damage of vision. Hence I believe that the television as a source of study is beneficial to some extent only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25912408759 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85046776827 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0037564137 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232326138101 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983081333694 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100007931784 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145046629404 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636762020971 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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