Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad.
Surely, there has been no time in history where the lives in of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day revels imitating celebrities in sports and movies has been the one of most prominent topic in the contemporary discussion people have always been intrigued to analyze and explain regarding this I would say.
To begin with, modals and film stars who look nearly perfect because of Photoshop effect have give rise to a generation obsessed with looking perfects. Even extramarital relationship is now considered perfectly acceptable because several celebrities have multiple partners. I think imitating is very bad because star are very cheap and he prefer the wear chip clothes and cheap shoes but this work never do common person. Celebrities are human beings too and they have their own weaknesses. Just because they happen to excel in a particular field, we can’t expect them to be paragons of virtue.
On the other hand, we do have something to learn from these famous people. They are achievers. Many of themes had humble beginnings; still they rose to fame because of their determination and hard work. We can also achieve the same if we make a sincere attempt.
Overall conclusion, we can say that most people are follow the celebrities this is so bad habits. The problem begins when you try to imitate everything that they do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
... bad because star are very cheap and he prefer the wear chip clothes and cheap shoes b...
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Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...lusion, we can say that most people are follow the celebrities this is so bad habits. ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry to imitate everything that they do.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, still, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02608695652 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70243186708 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4941247769 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9230769231 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164711202682 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048144220169 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606202466088 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988285450381 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625408757746 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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