The table below gives information about UK independent films.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table demonstrates the quantities of indie film published in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012. Overall, among ten categories; drama, documentary and comedy were there genres that had the highest number of released movies, whereas biopic, action and romance had the lowest figures.
Looking at the number of independent films broadcast-ed widely in 2012, it is clear that the drama, documentary, comedy had witnessed the highest number of films released, with 35, 35 and 26 films, respectively. All these three genres accounted for more than 60% of the total published number. Following mentioned categories, the number of films of horror, thriller were in the second places, less than 21% compared to the highest figure. These other genres underwent a small number of published films in 2012, especially, there was just one biopic film in the UK in 2012.
Observing in the sales figure, the blockbusters of the box office was comedy with 45,4% earnings came from ticket sales. However, almost every films bringing back the positive number of ticket sales were films came from unpopular genres such as horror, biopic with 20,2% and 9,1% respectively. These other kinds of film witnessed the low commercial income.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...st figure. These other genres underwent a small number of published films in 2012, especially, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, second, whereas, such as, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21717171717 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62995563968 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570707070707 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.139883928 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.777777778 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0314862883856 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0161161910651 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259964848569 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0241387832985 0.15604864568 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017518755797 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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