Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Every person seeks advice during tough decision-making situations in their lifetime. Some people considers it superior to get advised by others. However some other group of people believes they can look for advice through internet or books. This essay will discuss both these views and present my opinion about the same.
To begin with, getting advice from people in our surrounding is a wise decision because these advice are the lessons they learned from their mistakes. Elders struggled a lot in their life so they have myriad life experiences that could guide us wisely. Also there is authenticity of the advice that we get from our well-known friends , neighbors or relatives rather than an anonymous writer on internet.
On the other side, Books and internet provides wider range of knowledge that we could not get from our small friend circle. Also the twenty-four by seven availability feature is also incredible, we could look for any piece of advice any time, anywhere at no cost. For example, sometimes we have to pay heft amount of fees to consultants just to take advice on college choice for higher education.
In my opinion, advice taken from people we know are more reliable and trustful. We surround ourselves with a group of people who have similar lifestyle in terms of eating , age group or working environment. If we look at internet or books as a source of advice, they provide general advises without considering other factors of your personal life so it is not fruitful always. For instance, a friend of mine who knows well that I have diabetes and high blood pressure so he would advice me not to go for mountains trailing as compared to an unknown person on internet who motivates me to experience it once in lifetime.
In conclusion, a good piece of advice could transform the life of people but it really matters where we took advice from. In this modern world, we can surf internet and read books for advice and we hardly consult people in our lives. I suppose that getting advice from a person is far better than any other mode because it would be genuine, self-experienced, consider our personal factors as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
...s it superior to get advised by others. However some other group of people believes the...
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Message: Did you mean 'this advice' or 'these advices'?
Suggestion: this advice; these advices
... surrounding is a wise decision because these advice are the lessons they learned from their...
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Suggestion: Also,
...experiences that could guide us wisely. Also there is authenticity of the advice tha...
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Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88010899183 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61077602788 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553133514986 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3749126016 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.352941176 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29888177416 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108185692 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711330668695 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190042058694 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585399614834 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.