The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The given bar chart illustrates the mean shift in house prices of 5 dissimilar cities from different countries in two spans of period 1990-1995 and 1996-2002, compared with the year 1989.
Overall, according to the chart, five cities witnessed two contradictory trends during this period. While between 1990 and 1995, most of cities saw a downward tendency in average house value, the statistics of all cities experienced an upward trend from 1996 to 2002.
To begin with, obviously, during the period of 6 years from 1990-1995, three out of five cities' figures dropped, new york ( USA ) decreased by 5%, Tokyo ( Japan )and london ( UK ) share the same plough off approximately 7% compared with 1989's house price slightly increased with property percentage 1% and 1.5% respectively.
On the other hand, between 1996 and 2002, the average cost for buying a house in five cities almost rose significantly. Typically, london saw a dramatic surge in house value, its statistic increased by 11% compared with 1989. Following london but far less than this was. new york, the cost in this city jumped -5% to 5%. Interestingly, Frankfurt saw no changes in it data but a slightly decrease by about 0.5%. In addition, Tokyo an Madrid have similar increase of 2% in this period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cities') or simply say ''most cities''.
Suggestion: most of the cities; most cities
...is period. While between 1990 and 1995, most of cities saw a downward tendency in average hous...
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...nced an upward trend from 1996 to 2002. To begin with, obviously, during the per...
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...of five cities figures dropped, new york USA decreased by 5%, Tokyo Japan and l...
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...ve cities figures dropped, new york USA decreased by 5%, Tokyo Japan and london...
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...d, new york USA decreased by 5%, Tokyo Japan and london UK share the same plo...
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...decreased by 5%, Tokyo Japan and london UK share the same plough off approximat...
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...eased by 5%, Tokyo Japan and london UK share the same plough off approximately ...
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...wing london but far less than this was. new york, the cost in this city jumped -5% ...
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...Frankfurt saw no changes in it data but a slightly decrease by about 0.5%. In addition, Tokyo an M...
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...es in it data but a slightly decrease by about 0.5%. In addition, Tokyo an Madrid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02857142857 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69905501226 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638095238095 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6788259438 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395715474184 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135244123365 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105570637971 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243940291214 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445795293393 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.