Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that we are now faced with the problem of abundance of choices. I completely agree with this point of view, and I believe we can witness it in various aspects of the modern life.
In the field of education, students often find themselves in a situation where they have to choose from too many similar alternatives. Their preparation tool-kits are no longer limited to just official course books; test takers’ choices are now broadened to include a variety of complementary materials. To illustrate, for many students taking the IELTS test, the idea of too many choices in course books, practice tests, strategies and tips appears to add more layers of stress. As a result, they are confused about which courses to take and which advice to follow. I would argue that if their choices were limited to only a number of quality materials that closely resemble the actual test, students would likely perform better.
When it comes to entertainment, we as consumers are increasingly consumed by a barrage of choices. Firstly, there are options between traditional and new forms of digital media, both competing for our time. While conventional pastimes, namely reading or watching movies, still continue to capture our imagination, we might have to find time to try out new forms of entertainment such as mobile interactive gaming. Secondly, even within traditional forms of media, the amount of possible choices is overwhelming for the average viewer. As an example, the way in which we watch films and TV series has been permanently changed by streaming services such as Netflix, which often leaves us paralyzed, unable to pick from an extended list of thousands of titles.
In conclusion, I believe that an overwhelming number of choices has been embedded in most aspects of life, and having too many options can often be bewildering for decision makers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, still, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08090614887 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82868631352 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0735099784 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159532596187 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577847830849 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593743816614 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113823752911 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677841369362 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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