Restricting air travel is the only way to prevent air pollution. Do you agree?
It is argued that the exclusive way to alleviate the air problems is to limit the number of fights. However, i do not agree that restricting airplanes is less likely to address the air pollution issue from the root, even has some detrimental impacts on economy of country
The number of flights to all around the world is not the main reason to cause air pollution circumstance. Apart from air travel, there are enormous kinds of transportations such as bus, car and motorbike. In general, the amount of toxic emissions and exhaust fumes coming from the airplanes is not as much as from the buses and cars. According to VTV news, just nearly a half of emissions generated from air travel in comparison with buses and cars. Therefore, air travel would not be the main reason for environmental degradation.
What is more, once reducing the number of flights is carried out, economy growth of country will be decreased. As a result, the gap between the rich and the poor will become unbalanced - the more wealthy people, the less underprivileged people, causing a risk for nations wishing to become developed country as well as prosperous country. For instance, VietNam is a country having a situation described above; therefore, VietNam always meet the demand of flights for travellers to visit VietNam by offering many different flights
In conclusion, it seems to me that air travel is not only way to devastate the air quality or affects partly to environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92712550607 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80811674277 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566801619433 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.2147304149 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.222222222 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7777777778 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280697595682 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111022001941 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081848941592 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199888554767 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119950871182 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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