Should government invest on health or education? discuss both views.
In the ever advancing era, developments can be seen happening cosmically, however debtable side of many of these advancements has now become controversial. Some masses deem that government invest money on health, while others contradict their claim and says it spent money on education. However, I tend to believe that it spent money on both sides. The following exposition will further elaborate my views on this concern.
At the outset, there are a plethora of reasons to support my viewpoints, but most importantly authority should construct more hospitals in every city of state thats open in 24 hours because the patient cannot suffer more long route in any situation. Then after, there is no denying of the fact is that, it also made governments medical clinic in any village because villagers cannot quickly going in the city for hospital. Along with this, governments should sent medical team in any village of state, and check people with free medical camp, and they checked and operate people with no money.
In contradiction, the opposite side it is, governments should also invest money on education, it construct many government schools and collages in every city or village of state becuase poor children cannot afford costly education. Furthermore, many poor children is very intelligent but they stop their study because their low income, government should give monthly money for poor children in their bank account because the start their study and give best result to our.
To recapitulate, by contemplating all the facts together, I would like to say that government should invest money on both sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19771863118 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72149334831 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.257208418 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.7 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191222574278 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797739180138 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723704622136 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134562678304 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624980168256 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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