You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work.
Write a letter to the building manager and say
1– Explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute.
2– What problems have you encountered with parking?
3– What are your recommendations to solve them?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Harry martin, clerk boy working with citizen banks at Greenwich Branch. I usually commute by bicycle to my work and I have been parking my bike at your bike parking station since last two years. but unfortunately, I am facing some issues related to parking since last couple of months, this letter is with regards to same.
Reasons why I cycle a bike to my work is that Actually I live in Providence and there is no bus service from my point to the work place and I am from a lower class family and I cannot afford a car. Also, riding a bicycle keeps me fit and healthy. Everything was going well with the parking till last few months. but, due to shortage of parking, people park their cars in from of bike station and do not leave space to park bike due to which I have to ride for ten more miles to park my bike and walk for 20 minutes to reach office.
I request you to put a No parking sign board over the bicycle stands. Moreover an an extra car parking or bike stand at your backyard will probably solve my problem to a great extent.
I hope you will consider my issues seriously and take suitable actions as soon as possible.
Your's Faithfully,
Harry Martin
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| 2019-07-20 | harmankaur | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...e parking station since last two years. but unfortunately, I am facing some issues ...
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Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... with the parking till last few months. but, due to shortage of parking, people par...
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Line 6, column 71, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ing sign board over the bicycle stands. Moreover an an extra car parking or bike stand a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: an
...board over the bicycle stands. Moreover an an extra car parking or bike stand at your...
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Line 6, column 80, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: an; an
...board over the bicycle stands. Moreover an an extra car parking or bike stand at your...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, moreover, so, well, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3127753304 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24642824698 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7853027239 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198824851845 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766446576711 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490220729885 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118827124367 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427753921415 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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