You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
explain where you live
describe the problem
give reasons why you do not want this development
Write at least 150 words.
Dear sir or madam,
I am Harry martin, retired Army officer living in Warwick city of Rhode Island. this morning, I read about the plan of improving local airport (tf green) in the community magazine. I am writing this letter to express my opinion about the same.
Actually, the tf green airport is already the busiest local airport of our city. we have huge traffic issues during peak hours due to large number of flights at morning time. People approaching towards airport drive very rashly in order not to miss their flights, this has increased accident rates in our area.
The plan of making it larger and accelerating the count of flights will also increase traffic congestion and more accidents and mishappenings due to careless driving.this is not required at all because in our city we already have two major international airports that are just within fifty miles and provide flight to almost every other country in the world and even better options of different airlines.
I hope through the power of your pen, you will raise our concern to concerned authorities and they will reconsider this plan of adding more flights and area to local airport.
Your Sincerely,
harry martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir or madam, I am Harry martin, retired Army officer ...
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...iving in Warwick city of Rhode Island. this morning, I read about the plan of impro...
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... the busiest local airport of our city. we have huge traffic issues during peak ho...
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Suggestion:
...ve two major international airports that are just within fifty miles and provide ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97512437811 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48967074814 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.424111496 44.8134815571 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 111.111111111 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226182321757 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089146009394 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589244694838 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121865483081 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530019498423 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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