It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood.
Do you support or oppose this plan?
Some people prefer to have restaurants and other facilities in different neighborhoods to their homes. They alleged that residential areas must be separated from commercial ones. I agree with the idea that it is not plausible, therefore, I support the plan to construct a new restaurant in my neighborhood. I feel this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, I like to eat out frequently. Having many options of restaurants or cafes in my living area is an advantage for me because I would spend less time on traffic searching for places to eat. For example, last week I got hungry late night and I had not any food at home. I decided to ask for food and then I had to went out to pick it up, unfortunately it took half an hour. If there was a restaurant near my house it would not take so long time for me to eat that time.
Secondly, having some facilities by near in our neighborhood might increase the real estate value of our houses. Although, some people disagree, the majority of people, when they are looking for house to purchase, prefer neighborhoods that have restaurants, drugstores and supermarkets around it. Due to the advantage to avoid traffic in their daily lives. Hence, I would love if my house increase in value because this improvement in neighborhood.
Finally, the area might be safer with the increase in movement and circulation of people and cars. Residencial areas are usually quiet which may be dangerous for people to walk alone to get home. For example, I like to walk around the street at night to sleep better, so the movement can turn my walks safer. Some people may claim that the movement may disturb the residents of area, however, if everybody respect the laws nobody will be prejudice. For instance, customers should not parking their cars in forbidden places, restaurant’s owner should respect the hours of attendance and the loud of musics.
To sum up, I strongly support the plan to build a restaurant in my neighborhood. This is because I will have one more option when I go out to eat, my house may increase in value and because the movement generated by the clients may turn my walking in street safer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 419, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'laws'' or 'law's'?
Suggestion: laws'; law's
...area, however, if everybody respect the laws nobody will be prejudice. For instance,...
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Line 7, column 485, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'park'
Suggestion: park
...ice. For instance, customers should not parking their cars in forbidden places, restaur...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74074074074 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81302903133 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5370201174 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160619763385 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559607124837 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603711602644 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108413416514 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670469937744 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.