The chart below show the export of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in every category of export in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the main information by reporting main features and make comparison where possible
The following graph delineates the foreign trades of one country which supplied various goods internationally in billion Dollar during 2015 and 2016. While table compares the percentages varied in every class of export in 2015 and 2016.
As an overall trend, the profit earning from exports rises insignificantly in each category except one in Gems and Jewelry where reverse trend observed. However, the worth of textile products soared during this course along with small difference in percentages in other goods.
Although in context of profit gaining from international business and which is directly proportion to its value. The textile industry business leaped about 10$ billion dollar for 2015 and value of product also improved by 15.24 %. On the other hand a fall in profit and worth of jewelry and gems estimated about 5.18% with comparison 2015.
In next two categories Petroleum and agricultural products a minute difference showed in both the years. In fuel only 2 billion dollar business increased with its 3% worth while agriculture products rises insignificantly in both earning billion Dollar and value 0.81%. Nonetheless, engineering goods showed small jump of about 5 billion dollar in profit and 8.5% in this core value.
- Counties such as China, India and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact, many experts are of the opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is the most serious threat to life on this planet. Give some 56
- the graph below shows the quantities trasported in the uk between 1974 and 2002 by different mode of transport.sumerised the main information and by selecting main features where comparasion possible. 78
- the chart below shows the information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in summarize the information by reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
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- You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letteradvise them of your situationexplain how this is affecting yourequest a new card 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$10'.
Suggestion: $10
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Suggestion: worthwhile
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nonetheless, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34693877551 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77007638852 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.770375491 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.8 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226604132119 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969803107164 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100887987816 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151144718601 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117307834341 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.