Some people says the main environmental problem in our time is lost of plants and animal species. Others says that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
In the modern world due to improvement in science and technology, the globe become urbanized which surely enhanced the standard of life. But there are many more problems we have faced today. Some people think that because of urbanization prime environmental effect is lost of biodiversity. although some other people with broad view believed that there are some more important issues related to world.In this essay we will discuss both the views about main threatening problems like climate change and global warming. And also less devastating problem of species extinction with comparison above.
some people argue that due to frenzy of urbanization natural habitat of plants and animals are destroying. Eventually, leads to lost of biodiversity and extinction of species. In this way we lost essential resort of nature. Many species declared endangered internationally for example. The poaching of black pigeon is illegal in India hence, its consist of only 15 living birds in worlds. A recent report publish by Cambridge University by Dr. Robert that more than 10 species of animals and birds have disappeared from world just in 20 years. This repercussion will be deleted an important facet of globe.
On the other hand people with deep understanding about debilitating environmental problems have been concern about global warming and climate change. Nevertheless, because of growing number of vehicles and installation of industries. Therefore; the temperature of world increasing and natural disasters like floods. Another important aspect is pollution and soil degradation which would lead toward soil erosion. For instance whole world having growing concern and number of research published every year. About embarking leading issues would have devastating effect if did not control.
In this essay we discussed the both of views about most cruicel concern of environment. In my point of view deforestation and land soared amount of gasses in the air is the main problem. In end all the debilitating repercussion are just because of it. Although other problems are more important than lost of biodiversity which effecting world more severely.
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- Some people believe the visitors in other countries should follow the customs and behaviors. other think that host country should welcome cultural differences. discuss both the views and give your own opinion 73
- The diagram below shows the life cycle of silkworm and stages in the production of silk clothes.summarise the main information and make comparison where possible 78
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- Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43880597015 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89895780199 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6704398974 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8181818182 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2272727273 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255079177402 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652542100048 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714913329551 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166325473269 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786731513982 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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