Car ownership
In the last few decades prolification in the technology sector, cars are available for common people at a affordable price. Due to cheap car rates, Number of car owners drastically increased on roads in last three decades.
First of all, car companies comptitie with each other to dominate in car market. To increase sales and make profit, these organisations focus on middle class people, and develop and bulid cars for middle class individuals. Secondly, car compnies provide several kind of schemes and loans that make easy to afford car at reasonable price. Moreover, millions car are comes in market every years, that cause the increase in second hand cars. These second hand cars are 2-3 times cheaper than new cars. All these or many many other factors are play huge role in the increase number of cars on roads.
How ever, what kind of steps government take to reduce the cars on roads and prevention for massive traffic jams? Goverment improve there public transport system, make it reliable and reasonable for individuals. Apart from this, government increase road tax and sales tax for compnies. One another way to encourage people's to use public trabsport, is that give rewads to individuals for using public transport.
- The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sector's contribution to economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. 73
- Car ownership 56
- In towns and cities, the large shopping malls 62
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many Cities in the world are now, ' one big traffic jam'. 56
- Shopping malls and local shops 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
In the last few decades prolification in the technology sector,...
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Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cars are available for common people at a affordable price. Due to cheap car rate...
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Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...viduals. Secondly, car compnies provide several kind of schemes and loans that make easy to ...
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Line 2, column 513, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: many
...mes cheaper than new cars. All these or many many other factors are play huge role in the...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: HOW_EVER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'however'?
Suggestion: However
...he increase number of cars on roads. How ever, what kind of steps government take to ...
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Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reduce the cars on roads and prevention for massive traffic jams? Goverment imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54549152522 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622549019608 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3362871181 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270077875146 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114403629671 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823439366297 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185375916543 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101356802859 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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