The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given process below shows the how to produce electricity by using geothermal power
Overall, it is clear that, the process have five major steps. it starts with cold water pumped down and ending with turbine and generator sector
According to diagram, the first process is the cold water is pumped down to 4.5 km. After that the cold water passes through the injection well to the geothermal zone(hot rocks). then the water is sent to another well which is production well where water is heating and pumped up. The next step is, the hot water sent to condeser and generate steam. then the generated steam is rotate through turbine where the electrcity is produced by generator and it ready to use.
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...ending with turbine and generator sector According to diagram, the first process...
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...nerator sector According to diagram, the first process is the cold water is p...
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...rate steam. then the generated steam is rotate through turbine where the electrcity is...
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...ctrcity is produced by generator and it ready to use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 584.0 965.302439024 60% => OK
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7868852459 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22232449226 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 176.4 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.686910143 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123749697955 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625176942119 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627131793389 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120846999618 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120839362 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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