Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree?
Life is changing, difficulties in living, people are fighting in many poor countries to survive, by refuge to do bad criminals, to have money. Prison is the best place for bad people to be punished, but others believe that education and job training are better ways to help them.
From decades till today, prison is the final solution where criminals must be. First, some people think that bad individual to learn from his mistakes, must enter to the jail and isolate him/her from the community. A bad person must know that there is a law and rules they need to follow and show respect, where the penalty will be heavy on them and the regulations won’t protect bad and foul guys. However, criminals like theft, trafficking, drugs and killing are turning and destroying the society into a dirty environment, that’s why many people are appealing to send them to prisons. For example, in my country Lebanon, criminals are treated as slaves where the government don’t have any plan to develop their skills and help them to become good individuals when their judgment ends.
On the other hand, people believe that life changed, and everything can be solved in a rational way. Criminals can be sent to jails, but treated as normal people that missed their future and have another chance to fix what he/she did. Second, helping criminals to pass these situations by teaching and training them, they can learn, study new languages courses, especially youngsters that stopped their schools, also they can get trainings for new jobs like mechanic or handmade work. Moreover, the government can benefit from their capacities and develop their jails, even they can be an example for other prisoners and become the trainer that aid others to be a good person when they leave this place. For example, in developed countries, the criminal is treated in a way that one day he will be a good person and have his job when he is out of the jail.
As a conclusion, some people think that the best way to punish bad guys is to put them in prison, others believe that they must be treated in a good way and help them to get educated mentally and physically. In my opinion, I agree where criminals even they had a big crime, they should be assisted in changing their thoughts and know that they can be this person that he dreamed to be.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rational way" with adverb for "rational"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74938574939 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45496967507 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501228501229 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1857385887 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.071428571 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0714285714 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221508705345 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092502386052 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988027246098 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167723958383 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582095652953 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.