Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this
problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.
Nowadays, it can be seen that people are not enough familiar with their neighbors as compare to past which reveals that in today's fast pace world people has become enough busy that demonstrate the lack of time as well.
his paragraph will discuss few aspects that why people has created the distance between neighbors and adjacent people which actually is not good for spending life without knowing each others. Firstly, number of people is doing immense effort to grow up their life for the sake of their families that eventually is quite good in the sense of struggling. But, most of the population of the world has been engaged with many other activities especially youngish people who always prefer to being involved in social activity and spend leisure time with colleagues which also create the distance from neighbors. Along with, large number of people spend their most of the time in office and hardly give their time to family that virtually impossible to spend some time with adjacent people. Furthermore, survey depicts that 21st century is the fastest era comparatively where people are moving towards the technology which is being addiction of youngster that can also be the main cause of being unfamiliar with people.
In order to resolve this matter people need to set their time of everything including office, studies, social activities and others that actually will be helpful to find and meet with the people, in the mean time priorities must be segregated for each and everything alongside neighbors and adjacent people. Many intellectual people are concerned that every single person need to visit their neighbors in every occasion as well as send especial gifts that creates love between each others. In my experience, there is no denying that I usually prefer to visit my spare time with friend spite of visit neighbors which is not for ensuing time.
To sum up, having busy life schedule and facing hardships is far good for career growths but, ignore knowingly to the adjacent people has number of adverse consequences especially in emergency. Therefore, it’s the responsibility of dwellers stay close with their neighbors that also a tremendous act
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| 2019-07-25 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10584958217 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51701482515 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526462395543 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7954901362 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.636363636 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6363636364 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169950737258 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723974029979 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243258515613 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103733602024 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366677454126 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.