You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change the course.
• What course you are following now?
• Why you are not satisfied with the course?
• What course would you like to change to?
Dear Mr John,
I am a student at your college, studying in third semester and pursuing Electronics and Telecommunication. I am writing this letter to request you to grant permission for changing the course.
At the onset, I would like to appreciate that teachers in our school are well-educated, knowledgable and dedicated. However, I really do not feel engaged in the current subjects, and find it complex to understand the basic concepts. Moreover, we had a coding curriculum last semester which I got involved with.
As a part of university policy, if a student has desire to move to other academic branch at the beginning of third semester, then he should be allowed to migrate the subject. Owing to this, I share an interest towards Computer Science and would like to gain more insight of it.
Therefore, I request you to allow me to change the subject. I believe this is not only to going to help me my career ahead but will also improve my result in exams.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mudita Joshi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr John, I am a student at your college, studying...
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Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t will also improve my result in exams. I look forward to hear from you. You...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...my result in exams. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Mudit...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Mudita Joshi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89307389176 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0800851189 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227982470851 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082668344926 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101550657612 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118577628568 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619651991156 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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