You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
- give details of your study plans
- explain why you want to get a part-time job
- suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Mukesh,
I hope this letter finds you in tink of your health.I'm posting you this letter to share good news about my selection for post graduate program at your home ground in USA.
The program offered by university is a two year academic degree.I'm planning to land there two months earlier so that I can get familiar to climate.my course work is in the morning hours that leaves me free in the evening hence wish to apply for part-time job. Apparently I have contacted the campus committee to opt for on-campus positions and also plotting to apply off-campus positions as well.
As per the information brochure provided by admission office, the hostel and food expenses is quite high and not covered in the tuition waiver scheme.Additionally most of the on-campus jobs also demand prior job experience for part-time positions as well.Hence I wish to gain the experience by joining the workplace preferably office.
As your place is close to university campus, it's the best idea to find out job leads near your area. I want you to circulate my resume to the places you know and post an advertisement on local bill board.It will work out nicely with your support. hope to catch up with you soon.
With love,
Amit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mukesh, I hope this letter ifnds you in tink of ...
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Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Im
...letter ifnds you in tink of your health.Im posting you this letter to share good n...
^^
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...letter ifnds you in tink of your health.Im posting you this letter to share good n...
^^
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Im
...niversity is a two year academic degree.Im planning to land there two months earli...
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Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...niversity is a two year academic degree.Im planning to land there two months earli...
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Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
....my course work is in the morning hours thats leaves me free in the evening hence wis...
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Line 6, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Additionally
...not covered in the tution waiver scheme.Additionally most of the on-campus jobs also demand ...
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Line 6, column 150, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...not covered in the tution waiver scheme.Additionally most of the on-campus jobs also demand ...
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Line 6, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...erience for part-time positions as well.Hence I wish to gain the experience by joinin...
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Line 6, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...erience for part-time positions as well.Hence I wish to gain the experience by joinin...
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Line 8, column 46, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ur place is close to university campus, its the best idea to find out job leads nea...
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Suggestion: I
...ea to find out job leads near your area.I want you to circulate my resume to the ...
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Line 8, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: It
...ost an advertisemnt on local bill board.It will work out nicely with your support...
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Line 8, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...t an advertisemnt on local bill board.It will work out nicely with your support. ...
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Line 8, column 247, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...will work out nicely with your support. hope to catch up with you soon. With love,...
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Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to catch up with you soon. With love, Amit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, hence, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84761904762 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67183173259 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.829366728 44.8134815571 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.428571429 76.5299724578 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 16.8248392259 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261861192887 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102148977963 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889832841388 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150400790885 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941547722579 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 8.37731958763 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.