Some people say that a country should produce food locally, while others believe that it is good to import food. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Although it is thought by some people that a nation ought to produce food in their own country, others consider that it is better to import food from other countries. In my opinion, I think food produced locally can benefit more not only to
the country but also to people's health.
A good reason to produce food locally is that it helps to create employment opportunities. Since people buy food from local farmers, they are encouraged to involve in the farming business and grow a variety of food. This helps the economy to grow as many people are either themselves involved in farming or employ people to get the work done. For example, 65% of the Indian economy is dependent on farming because of local people's preference for local food and it employs more than half of the nation's population; thereby, helping the nation to grow faster.
Another point to consider is that food produced locally have less proportion of pesticides. Unlike imported food which involves too much of pesticides as it needs to travel thousands of miles before reaching to the final consumer, food grown locally can be reached at the destination fresh and with the minimal amount of pesticides. For example, according to a recent survey, compared to 60% of the food items have to be equipped with pesticides to keep it fresh for a longer duration, only 5% of local food had pesticides to keep it better for a couple of days. Therefore, locally grown food is better and can be consumed fresh with less proportion of chemicals.
In conclusion, food grown locally helps the economy of the country and give people an opportunity to consume fresh with fewer chemicals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85159010601 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57887111619 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508833922261 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0130188283 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.818181818 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235907059872 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117420638965 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616621053913 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157782339019 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628898318818 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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