the graph shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories

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the graph shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories

The data makes a comparison between the quantity of hours which married woman and married men are unpaid in three various groups : without any kid, with 1 to 2 kids and with more than 3 kids.

At first glance, it is clear that women who got married do unpaid work are higher than that of married men. While wives have more than 3 children do this job the most, husbands hit the lowest point.

As can be seen from the graph, women without children account for the smallest hour, at less than a third, compared to the highest hour in men, standing at nearly 20 hours. However, the number of woman having 1 to 2 children make up a significant soar to a half whereas that of men witnessed a slight fall by a mere 1 hour.
Surprisingly, There is a surge in the figure of married women having more than three children, with just under 60 hours for unpaid work whereas the unpaid working hours for married men constitute much less portion, namely just below 20 hours per week, compared with the unpaid working hour for males having only less than a fifth.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44845360825 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20389947878 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2595397096 43.030603864 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180108697601 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816689227373 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728664907206 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106903753149 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073197252865 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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