In many countries, people are living in a “throwaway society” where things are used for a short time and thrown away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?
Nowadays, use and throw phenomenon is quite prevalent in most of the countries. This essay will first discuss the major element lead to this trend, followed by the most pressing issues associated with this behaviour.
The busy lifestyle of the young generation is a primary reason to consume things for a short-term and then discard them. People don't want to spend time from their busy schedule to choose alternative options, which take time and effort to put things in reuse state over readily available things. For example, disposable plastic cups and plates are preferred over ceramic utensils at workplaces and parties to reduce the effort of cleaning. If every individual will start using the ceramic mug at the workplace then the amount of plastic waste produced daily can be reduced significantly.
The foremost problem caused by this tendency is environmental degradation. As plastic is non-degradable substance, the various methods such as landfills, incineration and dumping into the seas result in environmental pollution. Firstly, plastic waste, when dumped into the ground, makes the soil less fertile. Secondly, the burning of plastic litter makes the air quality poor to breathe because of the harmful gases such as carbon dioxide and methane released into the air. Lastly, the plastic debris dumped into oceans adversely affects sea life because of these toxic substances are consumed by the sea animals such as whales and turtles.
To conclude, the missing sense of responsibility to reuse the items by youngsters due to their long working hours is the main reason for consuming and discarding behaviour, which ultimately affects the ecosystem. It is therefore estimated by considering the continuity of this trend that this will be a big threat to our planet earth in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hort-term and then discard them. People dont want to spend time from their busy sche...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rties to reduce the effort of cleaning. If every individual will start using the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3044982699 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7621561056 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8460776846 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124901203078 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446558030391 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041646660396 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721915413469 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354866618228 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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