People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company that provides the connection. In your letter,
• Describe the problem.
• Explain how that is affecting people.
• Say what the company should do to help.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that there is a technical issues with the internet connection in our area. Yesterday in the morning most of tenants and I faced some difficulties in joining the internet. we tried to turn the wify device off and on several times without any progression in the performance.
As a result of such error, most of people and I were unable to perform our daily tasks due to poor service of the internet connections. Since most of us are students, we forced to find other places such as internet cafe to do our assignments. Therefore, we extremely are looking for your support to fix this problem as soon as possible by sending someone to check out this problem. In case this issue needs more than one day to be fixed you are kindly requested to supply us for a temporary internet line until ours getting fixed.
I would appreciate your immediate attention and action to this matter. I look forward to receiving your supportive response.
Best regards
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the tenants') or simply say ''most tenants''.
Suggestion: most of the tenants; most tenants
...n in our area. Yesterday in the morning most of tenants and I faced some difficulties in joinin...
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Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...e difficulties in joining the internet. we tried to turn the wify device off and o...
^^
Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out any progression in the performance. As a result of such error, most of peopl...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ormance. As a result of such error, most of people and I were unable to perform our daily ...
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Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...internet line until ours getting fixed. I would appreciate your immediate attent...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to receiving your supportive response. Best regards Bilal
^^^^^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r supportive response. Best regards Bilal
^^^^
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive response. Best regards Bilal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75706214689 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65676126408 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2541717528 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148861534873 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525931668642 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448608976093 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989661230437 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00702696111424 0.0580467560999 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.