The young spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping center it is feared this trend can bring negative influence on the youth and society. Agree or disagree
People can utilize there leisure time as they want and it is a individual choice. Now a days some people are clamming youngsters are wasting large amount of their free time in shopping centers and this trend leads to negative influences on the youth and the youth and the society. I completely disagree with this. Spending free time helps a lot to increase their abilities like communication skills and creativity.
Youngsters are interested towards shopping and spending their leisure time in shopping centers can improve their communication skills through that young people can able to communicate with any one any ware, spending time in shopping center helps them to gain knowledge in marketing and business because young people can observe the stratagems which was followed by multinational companies in shopping center. Now a days following trend is the major identity, the leisure time had used to know what is new trend in society which was the leading trend loved by people and which had passes away as old trend, beside this it can able to know the brand and their values this all can help youngster to communication well and gain knowledge.
Spending time in shopping centers helps young students to build their creativity well, field like fashion designing are based on creativity new fashion and new designing and new unpopular designs which aid then to create new style.
There is no negative imprecation on society by young people spending leisure time in shopping center it help to gain knowledge, improving communication skills and knowing new business tricks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ere leisure time as they want and it is a individual choice. Now a days some peop...
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Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...hey want and it is a individual choice. Now a days some people are clamming youngsters are...
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Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...want and it is a individual choice. Now a days some people are clamming youngsters are...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ung people can able to communicate with any one any ware, spending time in shopping cen...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...inational companies in shopping center. Now a days following trend is the major identity, ...
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Suggestion: a day; days
...ional companies in shopping center. Now a days following trend is the major identity, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d in society which was the leading trend loved by people and which had passes awa...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ding leisure time in shopping center it help to gain knowledge, improving communicat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13178294574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65699300002 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480620155039 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.551083399 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.5 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437251909316 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200787411606 0.084324248473 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106853969905 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270051850278 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127407527166 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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