Many people play sport when they are young, but then stop doing physical exercise when they become adults.
Why do so many adults stop doing physical exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
Sports and Physical exercise play a very important role in our day to day life. Individuals of a young age are more inclined towards sports whereas while becoming adults Physical exercise becomes of less importance. The reasons for refraining adults from doing physical exercise could be divided into three factors. One is Time and the second could be a personal reason or Interest.
Firstly, Time can the most relevant and foremost reason. Our super-speed life does not give us ample or a little time to involve ourselves in physical exercise. Researchers have shown that time has been a very important factor for not allowing individuals to take some time out for their physical activity. We are working in the offices which are so far away that we spend most of our time travelling or we are occupied in household activities which do not give us time for the activity. Due to this, one is more prone to diseases like obesity, high cholesterol levels, Diabetes and many more.
Secondly, Even if we get time for one, we do not have much interest in doing physical activity or involving ourselves in sports. Like many people have a hobby of sleeping or playing video games or spend time on social media. These individuals do not like getting themselves involved in sports or and outdoor activity. It is one's personal interest also which drives one to involve in the physical activity.
To conclude with the solutions, we can have gyms at the office; the offices can keep organizing outdoor sports for their employees. They can also tie-ups with the local gyms or nearby clubs of their office to render some discounts for their employees. The government can also participate by organising gym equipment in the public parks or opening conventional centres at subsidized rates.
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| 2019-07-30 | Megha Gupta | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62131434378 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9808408537 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229147046345 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786349244243 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576009526432 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144184550485 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826588646271 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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