More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endagered list. What are the reason for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
In modern times, the issue of extinction of wild animals due to human activities has become highly controversial. This has become serious problem for wild animals and our world. This essay will discuss the problem associated with this danger and offer some measures to tackle this issue.
Generally speaking, there are two main cause of extinction danger. Firstly, It is well-known fact that overhunting cause to extinction of wild animals. The more and more people are hunting to sell animals body parts to earn more money in all season and less people take care about close season to hunting. Secondly, it has been proven that forest destruction and pollution leads to lose habitat of wild animals living in forest. The result of this is animals are forced relocate another habitat, which in turn leads to massive animal death like slaughter.
Despite the challenges, there are a number ways to resolve this problem. Firstly, governments should make strict legislation about poaching in close season and overhunting. The result of this is that people who are hunting in close season may be worry about punishment and may be stopped the hunting. A second solution is that governments must be restrict in human entry to the animal habitat and should back up forested. If this implementations can be successful, wild animals can protect against extinction danger.
In a conclusion, extinction of wild animals is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. However,I believe that best solution is to inhibit extinction of wild animals by making strict legislation in the close season. If people who are poaching know the this punishment, the problems by extinction of animals could be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12230215827 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68861732358 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507194244604 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2203426896 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345877336773 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119882609647 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751925330742 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224928137638 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281187324205 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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