In some countries around the world, men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effect on society and family life?
In modern times, the issue of ages of having a baby has become highly controversial. The cause of this phenomenon is varied and have let to wide range effects on human life. I will outline in this essay why is occurring and discuss the impacts it can have on society.
Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people have being parents at late ages. The primary cause of this is that women focus making a career instead of being mother. This is due to enormous demand to have good job to earn much more salary, which has resulted in the postpone of having a baby and family. Secondly, men can be negatively affected by modernization. For example, Men do not feel like mature or adult to have a baby their thirties according to the past and they have a procrastination habit to deal with this issue.
The result of being parents in late time are numerous and potentially serious for society. Perhaps the most serious consequence of this is that people who are parents in late time confront generation gap with the child. For example, Parents do not understand the wishes and concern of the children’s due to quickly changes of society dynamics. A second consequence is that people might confront some serious health problem due to this trend. If one women or man who are older have baby, theirs children can have some genetically disorders like Down ’s syndrome.
In a conclusion, being a mother or father in late time is an issue, which is very relevant to modern society. If the governments or some health organizations choose the ignore the issue, the future of next generations will be in danger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...much more salary, which has resulted in the postpone of having a baby and family. Secondly, ...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ious consequence of this is that people who are parents in late time confront generatio...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one woman', 'a woman', or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: one woman; a woman; women
...us health problem due to this trend. If one women or man who are older have baby, theirs ...
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Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...ealth problem due to this trend. If one women or man who are older have baby, theirs ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nts or some health organizations choose the ignore the issue, the future of next generatio...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of next generations will be in danger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76325088339 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67286869251 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544169611307 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1921107715 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240761623183 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775465957936 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412277213118 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132903354125 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542615170433 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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