Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial issue about the role of vehicles in society. Some businessmen state that they bring more advantages to people, while some pedestrians say that they cause more drawbacks. In this essay, I will consider both pros and cons of automobiles, concluding it with the idea that the benefits of cars outdistance the disadvantages.
Let us start with the positive effects that cars have on human life. The first advantage is that they enable people to complete their plans more effectively. Cars help people to do their daily routines both more successfully and promptly, since people do not have to walk, for example, to the office or university, which used to pose many obstacles, before vehicles had been invented. Another benefit that cars provide comfort to drivers as well as passengers. Car users no longer worry, when it either rains or snows outside, because their vehicles protect them from these unpleasant weather conditions. As a result, they commute to work on time with no need to wear extra clothing.
However, despite these advantages, cars have many negative sides. Firstly, they constantly need special treatment. Drivers frequently have their vehicles checked, which is quite expensive for most people, if they want to avoid its breaking down on the road unexpectedly. Secondly, vehicles usually cause traffic congestions. A growing number of people use cars everyday, but since most roads have limits in bandwidth, there are many cases of traffic jams in cities, especially in the rush hour. Therefore, cars not only are problematic to people, but also to urban areas.
In conclusion, even though vehicles create many problems, I think that the beneficial sides outweigh these problems. Moreover, many people cannot imagine their life without cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ns. A growing number of people use cars everyday, but since most roads have limits in ba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26923076923 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71117041322 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5526147739 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6470588235 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183425930691 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515964153951 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488672087611 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101194579598 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476197014683 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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