Accommodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
While accommodation and transport issues are growing in urban areas, commercial activities are advised to shift to regional areas. The merits of migrating businesses to rural areas greatly outnumber the demerits as social amenities such as housing and good roads are readily available and there is job opportunities for rural dwellers.
On the one hand,there are several benefits in relocating work to the countryside. Firstly, accommodation are readily available and at a cheaper price in the rural areas,due to the fact that people have relocated to the urban centers for greener pastures. Similarly,the roads are favourable for transportation. Hence, availability of these social amenities reduce the cost of production and increase profit. Secondly,the economic status of the regional areas are improved when the indwelling business owners pay tax. Taxes paid by them are used for the development of the underdeveloped areas. Thirdly, employment opportunities are available for the rural dwellers. The movement of commercial activities to the countryside creates job opportunities for the residents therefore, poverty is alleviated and standard of living is improved.
On the other hand,the major problem involved in shifting work to remote areas is overpopulation,which is the increase in the total number of people living in a particular area. This occurs because people tend to migrate to areas where there are employment opportunities. Consequently, housing problems ensue when the number of people living in a particular area is greater than the available houses. Another worrying issue is that,most roads in the regional areas are destroyed after long use thereby leading to delay in transporting goods from the site of production. As a result,these products get destroyed and inflation arises.
In conclusion,the merits of moving commercial activities greatly outweighs its demerits as social amenities such as accommodation and good roads are readily available and at a cheaper rate likewise creation of job opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, likewise, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6862745098 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29807703744 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516339869281 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.39062267 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144272513134 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446860312458 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419115514371 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097955378198 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431214245756 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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