some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous & unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both opinion & give examples.
The importance of keeping pets is good for children which was always debatable now become more controversial with many people clamming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion . This essay will elaborate both aspects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion .
There are myraid of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from this fact that pets are beneficail for children. They spend there leisure time with them besides pets protect children from stranger . Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that pets are very reliable. Pets are very honest compared to human being.
Needless to say all merits stand of keeping pets in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that pets spread many dangerous disease in children . illustration, sometime dogs bite children which is very harmfull for them . hence, its apparent why many are against to keep pet at their residence.
According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefit of keeping pets for children are instrumental indeed . Nevertheless , the potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26086956522 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67105551943 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6038647343 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7555686752 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203984011762 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078194909967 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055086469244 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11850883061 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281347950994 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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