In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers.
What do you think is the most important investion for the past 100 years? Why?
In the last century, we have seen many developments and innovations over the world such as the invention of antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. In my opinion, the computer is one of the strongest and most effective inventions among other developments. In this essay, I will discuss how the computer has influenced many people and helped us in improving the education system, automation, and medical services as compared to other innovations.
To begin with, computers have improved the education system all over the world in many different ways, which includes studying on the computer rather than reading books. Even though it has some negative effects on school children such as impacting their eyesight, computers have many benefits for school children such as attending classes from home. In international universities, for instance, students had to attend college classroom classes and they had to travel long distances to attend lectures, but now after invention of computers, they are able to attend classes on computers using the internet.
Another point where computers have played a vital role in automating many manual processes in the manufacturing industry. People used to do many tasks using their hands, but the computer performs the task for them. In many factories, for instance, many manual processes completed by computers by a simple click.
Another point which could be made for computers is, it has improved medical sciences using computers. Many different kinds of computer applications have been developed to cure spreadable diseases. For example, computers have created many technologies such as x-ray, ultrasound, and other medical instruments.
To sum up, computers have played an important role in the development of many technologies in the medical sector, education system, and manufacturing industry. Computers could be very useful in the coming future as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51194539249 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93775977636 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542662116041 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.456845753 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13696063223 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591785780915 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376463777392 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872262999275 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273726346061 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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