Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Large supermarkets have recently introduced online shopping. While many shoppers do their food shopping online, many still tend to prefer shopping the traditional way by visiting supermarkets. This essay will discuss why online food shopping has its benefits, but why traditional food shopping is ultimately superior.
Online food shopping is certainly an efficient way to complete what many people consider to be a laborious chore. A person can simply click through a web site and have food delivered within a very short period of time to one’s door. As an example, a major supermarket in Australia promises a three hour turn around time on grocery delivery. Being able to shop online saves busy people the unnecessary hassle of having to visit a supermarket.
But not everyone needs to save time and visiting a supermarket can in fact be an extremely positive experience. Walking through the aisle allows one to choose from a vast array of different products and to decide exactly what goes into the shopping basket. For example, think about the variety of different vegetables available at a supermarket. It is enjoyable selecting the best avocado from the pile. It goes without saying that supermarket shopping, if you have the time, can be a pleasurable experience.
With the introduction of online food shopping, traditional routines are being challenged. This essay discussed why online shopping can be an extremely efficient process, but why shopping in the supermarket in person can be such a pleasurable experience. In my opinion, vising the supermarket offer a superior experience to online shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...re. A person can simply click through a web site and have food delivered within a very s...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...have food delivered within a very short period of time to one's door. As an example, a ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31007751938 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9786815401 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8227724475 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200299728304 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664336765644 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834031164123 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133399658289 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908400736833 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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