You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
when you will be arriving and leaving
what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost
inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to make the necessary arrangements for our stay at your hotel on 22nd and 23rd november. I will travel with my parents, wife and 7 years old son. I am hoping that you would be able to provide us with suitable accommodation and assist us to enjoy our trip.
we will arrive on 22nd november and check out from your hotel on 24th november before 12.00 pm. we are expecting two double size bedrooms with attached bathrooms, hot water and air cooler facilities. we would prefer rooms with sea view and room service. I would really appreciate if the rooms are on the same floor.
I am also interested to know about recreational activities in the vicinity. Despite my parent’s age, they are very lively and would love to go to the theatre, beach and amusement parks, if available. I would also like to know about the market, where we can buy traditional items and souvenirs.
Please notify me of the cost that will incur on our trip at your earliest with the facilities you can offer. I am expecting a comprehensive reply from your side about the details of activities and other information I requested.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Fahad Sultan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: We
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Suggestion: We
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73271889401 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68035642422 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622119815668 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4139576414 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3571428571 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26069539559 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798642515042 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428298233381 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131828264493 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360611568487 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.