Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers? Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own experience.
While country towns were once vibrant and growing places, in this day and age many appear to be dying as many rural dwellers has been moving to cities in search of work and excitement. In this essay, I intend to discuss the plausible explanations for this trend and its impact on urban dwellers.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that there was an influx of country dwellers into metropolises as a result of the high joblessness in the countryside. Rural residents are flocking to big cities searching for job opportunities offered by a variety of multinational companies and local companies in urban areas. One particularly salient example of this is the business-oriented Ho Chi Minh City where it provides migrants with thousands of new jobs monthly. Further, rural dwellers would find the idea of country life far more appealing if services and facilities in the country were more readily available.
Surprisingly, the most serious consequences of this worrying tendency are usually felt in urban areas. As a result of overcrowding, cities throughout the world these days are increasingly prone to environmental degradation such as air, water, and noise pollution. One especially notable example of this is Beijing. What is more, the uncontrolled growth of cities also gives rise to societal problems such as high unemployment, crime, and in less affluent nations, the creation of slums. The regulation of migration would be, therefore, warranted.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my perspective that the living standards of city residents would be negatively influenced due to rural depopulation and this is unlikely to be resolved in the foreseeable future. However, its impacts are by no means insurmountable and I am convinced that more people would choose the country as the city life becomes more uncomfortable and more expensive.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13941962081 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.283858912 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.461538462 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214591032653 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689823647503 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333946616561 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124997122846 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041208941816 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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