These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?
There is a controversial issue about the impact of long separation on the family bonds, while traveling overseas for business reasons. Some economists claim that it causes positive effects on the family, while some social workers state that it leads to household problems. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of this and agree that it creates more complications on families.
Let us start with the advantages of moving to other countries with family members. The first benefit is that many people will not suffer from loneliness on business trips. Employees, who travel abroad for a long period of time, often miss their family, but now that they can relocate to other nations with their family, they will stop longing for motherland. Another positive effect is that family ties usually remain stable. Many families break relationship, when living overseas on business, one of the spouse decides to divorce, because they find another partner, but travelling with family helps to avoid such situations. Therefore, the opportunity to take family, while doing work abroad, strengthens relationship and prevents it from collapses.
However, despite the advantages, business trips overseas have many drawbacks. Firstly, it may pose discomfort for children in education. Children may feel frustrated when their parents will often change residence, because it is difficult for them to both adjust to new school and make friends with classmates. Secondly, the other spouse has to quit a perspective job. Many wives, for instance, are to resign from their suitable workplace and seek a new position in a new country, which often force to start a career again. As a result, business relocation to another country with family create problems to other members, who have settled lifestyle.
In conclusion, even though some economists believe that traveling with family on business trips has many positive sides, I think that this type of journey imposes more problems for the above mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...Employees, who travel abroad for a long period of time, often miss their family, but now that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir parents will often change residence, because it is difficult for them to both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as for, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30094043887 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65100730707 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6331532368 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255380696971 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760736769723 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483441916313 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145505931673 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743604010125 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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