the pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2415.0 965.302439024 250% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 290.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.3275862069 4.92477711251 169% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.15563605885 2.65546596893 307% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 168.0 106.607317073 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 283.868780488 218% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.45097560976 145% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 22.4926829268 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 540.564230689 43.030603864 1256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 603.75 112.824112599 535% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.5 22.9334400587 316% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.25 5.23603664747 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0431682534449 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621664670053 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443874646534 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0431682534449 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 54.1 13.2329268293 409% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -43.91 61.2550243902 -72% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 6.51609756098 351% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.3 10.3012195122 362% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 32.22 11.4140731707 282% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.11 8.06136585366 150% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 40.7170731707 221% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 90.0 11.4329268293 787% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.9970731707 280% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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