You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have
never visited before. You have an acquaintance who lives there.
Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter
• explain your situation
• say why you feel unsure about living in the city
• ask some questions about life in the city
Dear Sunil,
I would like to inform you that I am going to join a multinational company in your city, Toronto. I had received offer letter last week to join Honeywell, which is a popular company in Toronto. As you know, I have never been there in Toronto before and I am little confused that where should I live in Toronto after arrival in the city.
Furthermore, I heard that Toronto has very cold weather throughout the year, and I am afraid of the freezing cold. I am not sure how would I manage to live there for such a long time. Although, I have managed to get some information about popular residential colonies, but still I am confused about where to live. If you could help me in finding right place to live, I would be grateful to you.
Also, if you could guide me about the life in the city, it could be very helpful for me to settle down easily. Specifically, I would like to know about public transportation, hospitality, and medical services. Finally, I would like to know about best shop for warn clothes as I am afraid of cold weather.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the best'.
Suggestion: about the best
...services. Finally, I would like to know about best shop for warn clothes as I am afraid of...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'weathers'.
Suggestion: weathers
...for warn clothes as I am afraid of cold weather. I am looking forward to hearing fro...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, still, well, you know, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51428571429 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62805377926 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.99417508 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22766722853 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885330025397 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678893502725 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14215483109 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042784492395 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.