These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many employees are sponsored to work in the foreign countries, but married couples prefer taking their dependents along with them. Such situations can lead to both pros and cons in the life of their offsprings while they shift to a new country. Through the course of this essay, I would like to present my viewpoint based on all the points and calculations by considering both the sides of the argument.
To begin with, children might find it really exciting moving especially moving from a developing country to a developed one. They might be exhilarated to see huge malls encompassing range of electric toys to play with which they never saw in their country. They would visit beautiful parks, attractive aquariums, and meet new people, which will in return empower their imagination growth. Moreover, their linguistic and communication skills may also highly benefit from it. One thing that needs special mentioning is that, the teenagers might learn a host of juvenile rights, which they would rarely learn in developing countries.
However, moving abroad may cause severe problems to them mentally if they are school going offsprings.Then might have to cop up with the lessons as per the new Institute. The study standards may vary vastly depending on the location like there is drastic difference between syllabus of schools in the United States and one in the United Kingdom. Such students might need counselling for sometime. Imagine if parents who were on work abroad, cannot spend quality time with them. this would deteriorate their conditions which may take a long time to resolve, thus creating big setback on their mind.
To conclude, people will always prefer travelling to abroad for business purposes for various benefits attached with it. My opinion is that, there are benefits that children can gain by moving with their families to a new country, but there can be severe disadvantages which cannot be ignored. Hence, to maintain a proper balance and any regrets parent must consider all the aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, thus, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14759036145 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63051499892 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611445783133 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1847245797 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140405714476 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466210620871 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347366864632 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921559397597 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324876759066 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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