The graph shows the number of enquiries received by a tourist information office of a city over a 6 months period in 2011.
The given line graph illustrates the volumes of queries which were received by three means at a tourist information office in the first 6 months of the year 2011.
Overall, enquiries made in person and those done by the telephone increased significantly from the third month, while those received by mail went in opposite direction from the same time.
In January, people made over 400 enquiries in person, while nearly 800 letters were received seeking information about the office. Questions coming through the telephone were almost 800. But by the next one month, information sought by phone and in person were 800 and 600 respectively, whereas emails showed a slight but insignificant downward shift from where it had been earlier. In March, the curve representing face to face enquiries overtook that of mails, which remained immune to changes, and sat exactly on 800. That of phone calls, on the other hand, shifted to the next line, 1000, and remained there.
April saw the birth of many changes. From then, a huge difference is noticed in the three kinds of queries received by the noted tourist office. While in person and telephone enquiries rose steadily, seating above 1800 and on 1600 in June, the number of written queries fell until it maintained a level below 400.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation sought by phone and in person were 800 and 600 respectively, whereas emails...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arlier. In March, the curve representing face to face enquiries overtook that of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, third, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52920635825 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595348837209 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5344544941 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255845156457 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825384916045 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849901637258 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152333493314 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811978415748 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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