do you agree or dis agree? it is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' job?
Since the beginning of the last century, the job market has become so competitive than before. Some people believe that it is easier for children should choose jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs; however, there is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubts on this belief. From a personal perspective, the former point of view carries more weight, given that parents could provide their children with support and experience. Below I will strive my supporting points in more detail.
The first and foremost point, children who follow their parents' steps can earn great experience, which simplifies their life. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is successful businessmen in Egypt; their children usually study business to help them in their careers with their parents after graduation. Provided that they accompany studying with experience, they can boost productivity. Consequently, making use of parents' experience has crucial benefits for children's future status.
Next, coupled with experience, support is another reason to follow parents' careers. Provided that children make mistakes, their parents will be by their sides to guide and support them. A recent survey that was conducted by The University of Toronto found that children who work their parents usually well practice and make mistakes less often, given that their parents teach them how to take optimal decisions. Furthermore, Children who work with their parents are less stressful. Therefore, choosing parents' jobs ensure success.
Admittedly, some people believe that following parents' jobs have many cons, given that children should have the right to follow their interests and desire rather than following their parents' jobs. Although there are some drawbacks to choose parents' career, I still think that the benefits outweigh the disadvantages. Starting a career from scratch has an immense challenge; however, choosing parents' careers will save time, which is another subtle point that should be born in mind. Moreover, parents can give their children a background about their jobs, which could be an essential experience that may take years to gain. As a result, following parents' careers can prevent children from wasting time.
Taking everything into consideration; without a doubt, choosing jobs that are similar to parents has great benefits, and underestimation the significance of these benefits in children's life is not logical. It is suggested that children compromise to achieve an interest/success career balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63797468354 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09809085735 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536708860759 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8034721142 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.35 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359274410368 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127706199795 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807388287539 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231278983869 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469802777874 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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