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Passage is about how glass building are harmful for wild bird. owing to birds can not undrestand diference between glass and open air they colid by window glassess. Aouther claim several soloution however, the speaker underscore it by three reasons.
First of all, passage asserts that one- way glass is a good solotion becouse people in bulding can see outside but birds cant see in side therefore they change their directions. In contrary the lecturer claims that is is not an appropiate option, which if sky's or trees's picture reflect on outter side of glass, still it is porobable brids colllide with it. they think the reflection of sky is the sky.
Second, the passage says that cilored srtips on window can pevent birds accident, by cotrast lecturer explains that it does not solve the pronlem. strips are not enough small and it thoese get small pepole inside can not have outside view.
last one, is that passage mentioned birds have internal megnetic filed and if buliding use powerfull electromagnets, can help birds to find right path. however proffessor repudiate it, he claims that brids use this ability for flying long distancese for example emigrate before winter form cold place to a warm place.Also birds use their eyes and brightness of light for short distance navigation for instance fly form one side of city to an other side. There for useing magnetic field in buildind is not an effective soloution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Owing
...ass building are harmful for wild bird. owing to birds can not undrestand diference b...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...le in bulding can see outside but birds cant see in side therefore they change their...
^^^^
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...s. In contrary the lecturer claims that is is not an appropiate option, which if skys...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...t is is not an appropiate option, which if skys or treess picture reflect on outt...
^^
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not an appropiate option, which if skys or treess picture reflect on outter side...
^^
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Strips
...ins that it does not solve the pronlem. strips are not enough small and it thoese get ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd it thoese get small pepole inside can not have outside view. last one, is t...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...e inside can not have outside view. last one, is that passage mentioned birds ha...
^^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ets, can help birds to find right path. however proffessor repudiate it, he claims that...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...ets, can help birds to find right path. however proffessor repudiate it, he claims that...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
... winter form cold place to a warm place.Also birds use their eyes and brightness of ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... winter form cold place to a warm place.Also birds use their eyes and brightness of ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 440, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...r instance fly form one side of city to an other side. There for useing magnetic field i...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99166666667 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41233807747 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.540411800872 123% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1315175372 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.909090909 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373566551445 0.272083759551 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133366834703 0.0996497079465 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878903570227 0.0662205650399 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210216033857 0.162205337803 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734008373122 0.0443174109184 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.