Write a letter to an agency to get information about accommodation. In your letter you should say
- Why you are going to London
- What kind of accommodation you want
- When you will arrive
Dear sir,
I am writing to draw your attention toward obtaining accommodation. I am Chandrika Kalpesh Sangani get addmission in master of management intech. I request to you for well developed accommodation provide for my further needed.
I am a student of Ahmedabad University 2002 intech. I will come in December to London- Wrembly for my master study because I competed my Bacheler degree and I want to do further study in this course.
I really appriciated you if you can help me to find the better house nearest of my college . If it will be in walking distance its very suitable for me. In additionaly, Dinning table, Wardrobe, Wash basine, Bed, Kitchen, Cupboard also required by me in good position.
My course will be start on 22nd January hence, I am palnning to arrive in December ending. So, please provide me nice accommodation so I can enjoy in better way.
Your prompt and favourable attention on my request would be highly appriciate.
Yours Faithfully,
C.K. Sangani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing to draw your attention towa...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...odation provide for my further needed. I am a student of Ahmedabad University 20...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt of Ahmedabad University 2002 intech. I will come in December to London- Wrembl...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... come in December to London- Wrembly for my master study because I competed my Ba...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt to do further study in this course. I really appriciated you if you can help ...
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Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
... to do further study in this course. I really appriciated you if you can help me to find the bett...
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Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...e. I really appriciated you if you can help me to find the better house nearest of my college ...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d the better house nearest of my college . If it will be in walking distance its v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, really, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94011976048 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92900088798 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658682634731 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.598149707 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.75 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166219614683 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554296951344 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550960387842 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804897444919 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505424608251 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.