Writing about advantages and disadvantages of mass media
Mass media has both advantages and disadvantages. To begin with, the media has many advantages. First of all, it educates people. Through television and radio programs, people get to learn about health matters, environmental conservation, and much more. Also, people get the latest news in a very short time. For example, people get news daily through the media and this keeps them updated on the happenings around the world. Another additional benefit, it entertains us. Watching it is an enjoyable way to relax. However, the media also has disadvantages. Probably, the media can make us lazy and addicted to it. Furthermore, it affected our health. Example, if we prolonged watching of television, it could lead to eyesight problems. In conclusion, mass media has not advantages but disadvantages as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 129.0 315.596192385 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26356589147 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03856192997 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697674418605 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2811330255 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.2307692308 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.92307692308 20.7667163134 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282141843919 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996087498483 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15333478654 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282141843919 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.34 50.2224549098 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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