Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the spcific solutions presented in the reading passage.
The reading passage contradicts the lecture in many ways stated below.
First of all, The lecturer is not convinced with the idea that relocating the Torreya plants in a microclimate having wetness or dampness and a cool environment in Florida would affect the growth of Torreya trees. This is because of the fact that the wetlands in Florida are drained, along with the change in climate of a larger area. The reason for the change maybe global warming and due to this alteration, the microclimate would not possess the same favourable characteristics it did before.
Secondly, an assistive migration of Torreya seeds far into the North where the temperature is cooler, is not best suited. To elaborate on this point, the lecturer gives an example of the Black locus tree/plant, which was relocated to the Northern area for a new surplus environment, causing a rapid growth of the trees. The quick spreading of the trees, dominated the existing endangered flora and fauna in that area leading to their extinction.
Lastly, the option of preserving the seeds and saplings in research centres for a monitored growth will not be able to suffice the purpose of protecting the species while conducting a research, since it will not be able to withstand the capacity.
According to the lecturer, the reasearch centres do not have the capacity to resist the diseases that can affect the saplings. The size and proportion for administrating the plants is not enough in comparison to the expanse of the tree growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ct the growth of Torreya trees. This is because of the fact that the wetlands in Florida are drained, al...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of preserving the seeds and saplings in research centres for a monitored growth ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 252.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01587301587 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80712389652 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56746031746 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1688381732 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.4 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 21.698381199 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06452816374 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0339499600238 0.272083759551 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0118875612685 0.0996497079465 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.018857883927 0.0662205650399 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0219230022289 0.162205337803 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020788898693 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.42419426049 117% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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