You are current student of Loren Brusque University studying business administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager. You have recently seen on university's notice board.
write a letter to Mr. Walker and
1. Give your reasons for writing.
2. Tell about your education.
3. Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr. Walker,
I am writing this letter in concern to apply for the post whose advertisement i have seen on notice board.
Today, on crossing through the corridor of college, your advert about the post of quality assurance manager catches my attention. After going whole notice i have found myself eligible for this job. I would be lucky if you give me a chance to associate with your esteemed organization as a employee.
Currently i am studying Master's in Business Administration from Loren Bursque University. I have completed bachelor's degree from Stanford University last year. After finishing my course i have attended six weeks training in professional venture and successfully completed it.
I am trained in various aspects of business through a private company. I have spent few months in Steanly company as Senior Manager. I knew all the important aspects of managing departments as manager. I have three weeks experience in inventory, production and financial departments. So, i found myself suitable for this job.
I look forward to hearing you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...iate with your esteemed organization as a employee. Currently i am studying Ma...
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Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rganization as a employee. Currently i am studying Masters in Business Adminis...
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Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s in Steanly company as Senior Manager. I knew all the important aspects of manag...
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Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cts of managing departments as manager. I have three weeks experience in inventor...
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Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oduction and financial departments. So, i found myself suitable for this job. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36931818182 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97036303504 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670454545455 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.232260271 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5714285714 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300630372318 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791327067023 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572764515819 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139918253351 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478998429285 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.